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Shannon 3

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Description

Charcoal on 18x24 Newsprint
Image size
569x750px 54.83 KB
Make
SONY
Model
DSC-W50
Shutter Speed
10/400 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Mar 6, 2007, 4:08:42 AM
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dearlithium's avatar
Hi there!
Let's get right to it:
This is quite an interesting composition, a good way to take the focus off of the face and onto the body. There aren't many structural problems, but the hand definitely needs practice (tricky things, no?). The shading is generally good, except you have to keep in mind that not everything is surrounded by a stark black line. Use shading to bring out depth, not lines, because they usually do the opposite. That's all I can think of now.